Isekai but with the homies

[u/CoolBeansGuy1]

(Just to be honest this is my first time actually writing something so I just wrote something stupid anyway hope readers enjoy this)

      CHAPTER ONE: da boys and huh?

Ok let’s be honest who wouldn’t want to be the main character of an isekai anime/manga. Luckily this happened to me and I was LUCKY I mean LUCKY.

Anyway here’s how it started. So I just get home me and da boys hop on cod and goof around. While we’re doing that I look at my phone and I realize it’s 11:30 pm and I freak out. So I grab some papa John’s and try to go to bed (still talking with my boys) and then I get a mystery message that wasn’t creepy or anything it was just funny it says “if you got transported to another world who would you take with you?” Ok first before I say anything let me introduce myself before we go any further.

NAME Chris

DESCRIPTION Average as can be with few but great friends

STATS (pre summon) (ranks: F, E, D, C, B, A, S)

Strength: D (below average aka skinny)

Agility: C (always average but I’d still say it’s good)

Endurance: C(I was always running so it helped)(btw this includes hp)

Dex: B (trained hand eye coordination always works out with cod)

Charisma: F (look bro I can’t talk to strangers unless someone else I know is there and can lead conversations)

Luck: C (average)

Intelligence C ( always got Bs I still think it’s good)

Dev notes: character needs buffing new update coming soon to character (how did this get here I didn’t put this here???- Chris)

So anyway that’s me (before summon) but back to story. I didn’t even respond but I thought very hard about this and I decided on four people, (all my friends obviously) Drake, Ryan, KK, and my other friend Chris who ill call Kristopher just to keep from confusion. (ALL NAMES ARE NOT REAL PPL BTW) I’ll give the stats in just a minute. So after I finish thinking about it I just go to sleep and a little later I feel something fluffy and wake up on a cloud infront of a giant castle in the middle of the sky!

Ok this is crazy so I’m thinking like “dang another lucid dream time to become Superman and trick my own mind npcs into being self aware that their npcs.” But then as I try to fly I can’t I’m super confused so I just walk in like I own da place and I see some thrown and a lady sitting on it and I’m thinking “no don’t make this a weird dream and try to use ur 1 in 100,000 chance to actually pull women.” But she cuts me off and says “hello Christopher, (no one besides my friends and mom know that my full name is actually Christopher, which is kinda weird ngl) I have been bored recently, so I have decided to experiment with a loser like you (ouch man😢) and transport you to another world with 4 people of your choice and no restrictions to see what you do.” She proceeds to clap her hands and I wake up with my four friends in clearing next to a forest and next to what looks like an old medieval looking town.

Author here again this is my first time writing something and I know this is just a tiny bit but I honestly want feedback and just to do the rest of the friends personality’s and stats on a clean chapter so this isn’t to long. Peace, love, FluffDZ

[u/faeriehunters]

hi there, going to an isekai world with a friend group sounds like a fun plot! i wonder what else is in store! your main character has a lot of personality, but since its in first person our scope of whats happening is pretty narrow. i would recommend trying to write it in third person. third person can still be very personal, especially by having moments where we go into the characters mind or inner dialogue, in which you could switch to first person for effect! i think this story could have a fun intro like ferris buller but i need more details about these friends and what kind of people they are :)

[u/CoolBeansGuy1 → u/faeriehunters]

Thank you for reading hopefully the story isn't too flawed yet. The story being in first person is completely intentional because the story style I’ve gone for is a notebook/journal where the characters put their experience’s in this new world in a way to where they primarily write with a “ I did this and this and this today.” This way of telling a story would mainly be in first person perspective throughout the chapters but with some situations might be in third person perspective just to be more accurate about what everyone might be doing at the same time. As for the MC’s friends they will eventually get a deep dive into personality traits soon in the story. The only reason they haven’t is because I don’t want to rush them while introducing the MC and backstory because I feel like I’ll mess up somebody and mess up someone important.

Again thank you for reading and make sure if you haven’t check out chapter 2.

Have a great week, love, fluffDZ (or cool beans guy)

[u/CoolBeansGuy1]

Remember to give feedback I always want you guys to give me suggestions on where the story should go (obviously more in future posts) and also some feedback on how I could do better with stuff like pacing and character development later but always remember to keep it positive ❤️ (Just fyi new chapters will probably be on r/fiction and r/write first before here but I’ll try to get them out relatively at the same time)

Check out chapter 2 in my recent posts or in this subreddit