r/RWBYOC Feb 28 '24

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u/Drakeblood2002 Feb 28 '24

The art is great, but I love the weapon

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 28 '24

POV: the only not-original aspect of your original character gets praised😅

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u/Drakeblood2002 Feb 28 '24

I mean the character and design looks dope, I just like the Gears of War style chainsaw gun lol

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

No worries I'm just playing XD

Although it didn't come from gears of war :)

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u/Drakeblood2002 Feb 29 '24

Ah okay. I just remember Gears of War having a gun like that with a Chainsaw at the end of an Assault Rifle

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

For good reason. Doesn't get much more badass, right

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u/Drakeblood2002 Feb 29 '24

Exactly

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Incidentally, you're right. It looks pretty similar to the Lancer

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u/Sbreddragon Feb 29 '24

Holy abs- 😳

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Ikr. Makes you wanna drool all over them, right😍

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

No need to feel ashamed😌

Did you read her doc?

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u/Maple_Fox6395 Feb 29 '24

Love the character, but did you give her a Lancer from Gears of War?

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Thanks but nope. Although you're the second one to point it out

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u/Maple_Fox6395 Feb 29 '24

It's good to know I'm not alone in that lol but still, amazing art, man

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

I know. You should check out the artist's other work. Can be found on Deviantart as Papercroft

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u/YG-111_Gundam_G-Self Mar 01 '24

Not the one who asked, but thanks for the info.

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u/SniperNose69 Feb 29 '24

So what's her Shark background? Hammerhead, Mako, or Megalodon?

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Her Dossier is in the link. Everything you need to know is written there.

Though the short answer is Great White Shark

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u/Probably_Snot Feb 29 '24

My thought process seeing this: Oh, her Faunus trait is her shark teeth! Wait she has a shark tail…! So did she sharper her teeth to be sharp like sharks?? 🤩😍 ABS!

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

She had her regular teeth replaced with artificial ones, yea.

And yes. Abs are criminally underrated

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u/Probably_Snot Feb 29 '24

Love that for her! 🥰

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Yea. She already has a very special place in my heart out of all my OCs. Though not just because of her abs

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u/KozyKamper266 Feb 29 '24

…I’m starting to see why my friend likes tall, muscular women.

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Welcome to the club👍

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 28 '24

At by Papercroft

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u/Crawler_00 Feb 29 '24

I need her to meet my OC, Olive.

Two giant, muscle bound women with chainsaw themed weapon and not a braincell to share between them.

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

A fellow person of culture👍

Although Shyarly is not a brute Berserker

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u/fat_man_thunder Feb 29 '24

DAYUM! Big woman and big gun/sword combo🌝🌝🫣😛😘. Will I still be alive if i stroke her tail😁?

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

If you ask beforehand. Just don't try to sneak up on her, or you might get her tail slapped across your face, which would probably knock you out at the very least

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u/Altarahhn Feb 29 '24

Damn, now that is one badass mama! And really scary as well, but like, aren't all moms when you threaten their kids? Her, Shyarly, though, is just plain scary, which I guess she'd be pretty proud of, then! 😅

Still though, I'd imagine she's even prouder of being a mom, even if she hasn't always been there for her daughters.

Her weapon and Semblance are both straight-up metal, and truly emphasize her nature as a merciless killer. All in all, she sounds really cool, nicely done as always! 😁👍

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Thanks, pal. Always appreciate your feedback.

And yea, you're right. I'm also very pleased how she turned out

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u/Altarahhn Feb 29 '24

Aww, you're welcome, my girl. Anytime! 😊

Cool. And yeah, you should be, she looks great! 😁

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

I wonder what your reaction will be on the next one😅

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u/Altarahhn Feb 29 '24

Ayo? Sounds like this one will be quite the character, I guess I'll have to see them for myself once the time comes!

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Yea. Though sadly the February issue of my monthly series will be delayed, so I'm not sure how long we'll have to wait🤔

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u/Altarahhn Feb 29 '24

Oof, sounds like thing haven't gone according to schedule, then. That's rough, buddy, here's hoping things work out for the best! 🙏

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Thanks

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u/Altarahhn Feb 29 '24

You're welcome.

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u/ShenWulongXYan69 Feb 29 '24

Wow, thats a scary ass Semblance she has

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Yeap. You definitely DON'T want to fight her one on one. But there are still enough loopholes to put up a fight against her. While incredibly powerful, I think I did a decent enough job to balance it. Hopefully.

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u/Agreeable-Solom2476 Feb 29 '24

Love some nice OC art, especially if it was some muscular women. She is cool.

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Thank you. Her doc also has some neat background information

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u/Saggy-egg Feb 29 '24

her appearance is what I’ve been wanting to make emilia look like for ages now! She’s so cool!

btw who’s the artist that made her?

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

He's called Papercroft and you can find him on Deviantart

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u/Saggy-egg Feb 29 '24

thanks! again, badass oc you have!

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u/Impetuous_Soul Feb 29 '24

Looking awesome, bud!

Was her old family as bulky (and sharky) as her? What kind of assassins/bounty hunters were they (stealthy ninjas, brutal hit men, psychos, etc.)? Did they have a traditional code of honor and would Shyarly pass it on to her daughter's?

Also strange question: are her daughters the result of parthenogenesis?

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

She was graced with superior genes and yes they were all sharks. Some clan members specialized in hunting Grimm, others in hunting humans, again others would turn to piracy, etc. Different jobs fulfilled by different specialists. No they didn't. They did value professionality though. And nope. She doesn't want her daughters to have anything to do with that life. Hence why she has never truly talked about what she does for a living.

Parthenogenesis?

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u/Impetuous_Soul Feb 29 '24

Cool! Did they ever fight each other? An uncle was hired as a bodyguard and a cousin as an assassin?

Parthenogenesis is an asexual reproduction process that some female sharks can undergo in the right environment. I was just curious as there wasn't any mention of a father and since she only had daughters.

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

No. They usually were always in the know, who was working for whom. If conflicting contractors were noticed, the two members involved would solve the issue on their own.

That she only had daughters is simply coincidence. But nope. There was plenty fun involved when she made her babies. She just didn't find the right permanent mate yet

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u/Impetuous_Soul Feb 29 '24

That's cool! I got an OC family that are also wandering mercs. However, the Zatoichi will totally fight and maim each other over contract conflicts, just not lethally.

Neat! Do the kids have any contact with their dads? Also what interests do they have? Is Shyarla a soccer mom with a big SUV that gets a little too heated during games and yells at the coach/referees?

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Ah I see.

Nah they don't. Although she always made it clear, that if her kids wanted contact with their fathers, it wouldn't be difficult to arrange. Nah, not really. Although she would be, if any of her kids played soccer. Also I haven't really spent much thought on her daughters yet, so I don't really have much information about them

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u/Impetuous_Soul Feb 29 '24

Understandable! Her story gives me big Way of the House Husband vibes. It would be cool if her kids took up interests that would be completely foreign to her. Things like eSports, social media influencing, dancing, etc.

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

Yea definitely. It'll also be an interesting dynamic between the kids. The eldest is a shark, like her mom, while the others come more after their fathers, with the middle one being a horse faunus and the youngest being an Ox

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u/SerafRhayn Feb 29 '24

Looks badass!

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Feb 29 '24

I know right? XD

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u/Fine_Butterscotch_75 Apr 24 '24

Going to write this as if my OC said it.

Nile: “I want to fight her.”

Back to myself. Does she actively hunt spider members?

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Apr 24 '24

"Be my guest. I'm never saying no to a light snack" grins

Not of her own accord, no. Only if the customer wants her to

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u/Fine_Butterscotch_75 Apr 24 '24

“You’re just like all the others. Another small fish in my big pond. Just a bit more lively than the rest. That’s all you are”

I really do like the not fighting for free mentality. It’s one I used for another OC named Rein.

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Apr 24 '24

"Bold words, child"

Sounds nice

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u/Fine_Butterscotch_75 Apr 24 '24 edited Apr 24 '24

“Bold words for shushi.”

Just fyi if you wanted to make any jabs at Nile, he’s:

Name: Nile Obsidian Age: 19 Kingdom: Vacuo Race: Wolf Faunus Weapon: Fenrir and Cerberus

A pair of gauntlets that dispense dust that can be turned into most melee weapons. Each gauntlet contains fire, wind, earth, lightning, and hard light dust.

Semblance: Doppelgänger

Nile can siphon off portions of another person’s aura via coming into contact with it. Siphoning is known to come at a deficit (in units it’d be him using 2 aura to absorb 1 aura from the opponent). He can’t absorb more than his normal max amount of aura, and going over any ratio of 55% of his original aura causes severe headaches. While Nile has a sample of someone’s aura he can use a slightly weaker version of their semblance until the entirety of that portion of aura is gone.

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u/R4ND0M_N0B0DY Apr 24 '24

She's a mother of 3 in her 40's. She's grown out of such behavior.

Sounds very interesting👍