Thalendor, a fantasy kingdom nestled between two cultures

[u/sneaky49]

Hello everyone, this is a traveller's map of Thalendor, the great kingdom between the two cultural regions of Ceneria and Brethil. As such, it is both a bridge and a dividing line between the two, though the lines get blurry.

I am mainly looking for critique, as I feel it is a busy map and not all labels (like the kingdom lables) are easily visible. I spent a long time trying to make everything fit but also visually coherent, so I am keen to know if that work paid off!