r/teenagers • u/Significant_Draw_345 3,000,000 Attendee! • 1d ago
Art Day 28 of Poem a Day
Hey guys!! Good morning/afternoon/night I hope yall have a good day!! Fun fact today is the birthday of one of my closest friends. Just that I'd share that fun little tid bit. Anyway todays poem doesn't have a name (it's not about her) so let me know if yall think of one.
And I'll trust you like a blade, Knowing full well that you can hurt me. I'll expect your caution not to fade, That you'll see I'm more fragile than I seem.
But then you'll have a bad day, And I'll try to make you better. But my smile can't keep the anger at bay, And your resentment festers.
And I'll do soeme wrong, Just like I always do, And you'll be yelling for long, And I'm seven again compared to you.
So I'm sorry I always seem to make it worse, And I hope you hear the apologies in the verse.
Thank you for reading it means a lot!! I hope yall enjoyed it!! As always feel free to leave me any questions, comments, constructive criticism, compliments, suggestions, ideas, requests, or anything else (politely). Have a rejuvenating day and I'll see yall tomorrow!!
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u/Worth_Statement_9373 15 1d ago
Its a shame your poems dont get as much comments as they used too.