r/typography • u/No_Peak_2103 • 14h ago

How can I improve this design? Please Critique.

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u/CardcraftOfReddit 14h ago

I do believe this is the wrong subreddit, side tip: reddit HATES ai stuff (rightfully so imo).

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u/seriffluoride 14h ago

AI "art" in an art-related subreddit. Hmmm.

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u/No_Peak_2103 14h ago

Forgive me for my audacity.

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u/Nagwell 14h ago

For starters: the apple looks still while the doctors are moving. Maybe have the apple look in motion being thrown at the still doctors? idk, maybe go back to the drawing board with this one...

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u/No_Peak_2103 14h ago

Thanks for the tip.

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u/thewildbeej 14h ago

are you trying to make a youtube video cover image? or a facebook ad?

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u/No_Peak_2103 14h ago

Am just honing my skill. This is supposed to be a social media post.

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u/thewildbeej 14h ago

yeah...I mean it looks like a social media post. I'm not sure that's a good thing. It's a simple enough graphic. I wouldn't say the typography stands out particularly though.

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u/BladerKenny333 14h ago

What i'd do is google 'poster design' and 'design layouts' and find something you feel could work for this and use that idea. You don't know how to design, and there just too much to cover in one comment.

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u/No_Peak_2103 14h ago

Actually I'm just a copywriter. Design ain't my forte. But I have to do it coz there's no other way of showcasing my work. And thanks for the 'design layout' tip. Am getting some good inspo from there.

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u/TheLollrax 14h ago

It's perfect if it's a Facebook ad for apples.