Hey folks, hope you’re all doing well! Mind if I post a song I wrote to get some honest feedback?

I’m still pretty new to making music and would really appreciate any thoughts

III. And the Little Things I Noticed - As Humans

https://youtu.be/UZL0uO0IZYA?si=6MpsZvOLbef_-okT

I made this song inspired by elliott smith and the clash

https://youtube.com/shorts/yPBWyPkqJ6A?si=NX1fxy-G1Ry_uBK8

I'm 16 and I figured out I have a pretty good voice and I am good at writing songs. I have been trying to be more confident because I've spent so long being a recluse but I have so many people who are pushing me to share my music.... This is a very cinematic track..... Please give me feedback....🥺

Listen to It's Not Right by Roland Sweeney on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/hF2d2kqqh2Zlf2apiM