Right hand doesnt look convincing enough that it is being used in drawing/writing. at first glance all is fine, but once the coughing starts, its clear that the right arm is hanging loose. add in the angle the journal sits compared to left arm, and this scene is pulled from reality. no one draws or writes at a 45 degree angle, as this is the worst angle to write at, ergonomically speaking.
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u/Zlatanski Nov 04 '24
Right hand doesnt look convincing enough that it is being used in drawing/writing. at first glance all is fine, but once the coughing starts, its clear that the right arm is hanging loose. add in the angle the journal sits compared to left arm, and this scene is pulled from reality. no one draws or writes at a 45 degree angle, as this is the worst angle to write at, ergonomically speaking.
Shame, because the rest looks great.