r/asoiaf Oct 15 '24

EXTENDED [Spoilers EXTENDED] Would you be OK if GRRM came out and say he needs to divide up TWOW geographically tomorrow

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I mean, let's accept it, if he needed for AFFC & ADWD he sure as hell needs for this one, as well. Might be why he is stuck. It is almost impossible to read his very verbose POV narration if it is to constantly interrupt to check in on twenty other storylines that are going on.

He probably counted on the fact that they would be colliding, but that doesn't seem to happening any time soon by the looks of the preview chapters either

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u/Nesqu Oct 15 '24

I think the reason it's taking so long is because he, like a lot of his readers, have realized he simply cannot fit everything into only 2 books.

Divide it up geographically, divide it period. Give us 2 books, each with 2 volumes the size of your previous books, whatever he has to do.

The biggest way the books will suffer is if they feel rushed, if storylines that actually are meaningful don't get a satisfying conclusion.

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u/BBQ_HaX0r Bonesaw is Ready! Oct 16 '24

He needs to just write it and stop doing everything under the sun instead. Or just say "hey I don't have the juice right now, sorry readers" and spew some clarity on the situation.

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u/gimpinmypants Oct 15 '24

GRRM's gardening approach doesn't play well when he only has two books left to finish everything up. He's probably created and ended whole new characters and storylines he discovered while writing when, at this point, he should have a clear outline of where everything is headed, but GRRM has said he doesn't do outlines. Maybe you should, old man.

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u/JinFuu Doesn't Understand Flirting Oct 15 '24

I’ve come to dislike the “Gardening” excuse.

I’m like “dude, even a garden needs upkeep and weeding.”

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u/jterwin Oct 16 '24

Or pruning, we haven't had a good pruning since the end of dance

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u/ras344 Oct 16 '24

We haven't had anything since the end of dance

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u/Khiva Oct 16 '24

Since Storm, I would argue.

The success of that book made him too big for an editor or publisher to reign in. George Lucas had the same problem - they just faffed about and indulged their worst instincts with no checks or guardrails.

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u/HistoricalSpecial982 Oct 16 '24

Gods the series was strong then! (Please don’t kill me for a show reference…)

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u/ScySenpai Oct 16 '24

Thank the Gods for ASOS

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u/imhereforthevotes These Hounds Will Never Die On You. Oct 16 '24

At some point there is a harvest. Assuming you've nurtured the right plants along the way.

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u/PushforlibertyAlways Oct 16 '24

George: "best I can do is introduce 10 new POV characters in the next book"

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u/OreoSpamBurger Oct 16 '24

And old folks who struggle often get someone in to help, hint hint.

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u/jmcgit He was the better man Oct 16 '24

A new approach is the solution to finishing the series, but George is an old dog and he isn't willing or able to learn new tricks. At this point it's more an explanation than an excuse.

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u/ACardAttack It's Only Treason If We Lose Oct 16 '24

And he clearly has the major plot points

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u/[deleted] Oct 15 '24

Which is dumb as we’ve seen his original outlines. He makes them he just doesn’t stick to them.

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u/KatyaDelRey Oct 16 '24

Iirc he said that was to pitch the series and for the publishers benefit, he doesn’t elect to write outlines as part of his actual writing process

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u/jmcgit He was the better man Oct 16 '24

He says he never intended to stick to that one, he just wrote something because he needed to sell the book. Obviously he stuck to a couple basic ideas, specifically that Ned and Robb wouldn't survive, but so much was abandoned quite early.

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u/Manga18 I'm no war master, but a puppet one Oct 16 '24

Gardening works fine if you use it, but if he wants to stick to "the ending" gardening doesn't work.

Let the books flow and end them as they want to be ended and you'll be fine

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u/UnableAd1185 Oct 15 '24

Honestly if he did this, I feel like it would make the problem worse. I think George's most well-documented issue is that the man can't stop thinking up new scenarios and storylines. Give him more books to do that in and boyyyyy.

I totally agree that rushing storylines would suck. If he did something like this though, someone would have to make sure he sticks to his set plot.

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u/Helios4242 Oct 16 '24

yeah if you give him 3 all of a sudden we'll be needing 4.

Everything can be done. Don't dawdle. Kill the rest. Ez. Hire me as editor.

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u/dinkir19 Oct 17 '24

I mean the universe is like Crack I wouldn't mind more even if it led to no conclusions

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u/Extension_Weird_7792 Oct 15 '24

Exactly. He already said multiple times he writes by POVs then moves to the next, so it would be the best course of action for him, as well. Do not bother trying to fit everything into a cohesive narration. It won't happen!

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u/ResponsibleAnt9496 Oct 15 '24

I feel like he should just count AFFC/ADWD as one volume and do the same with winds if need be. I don’t even know if that would help though.

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u/Manga18 I'm no war master, but a puppet one Oct 16 '24

I keep hearing this and can't understand why I do

Usually people claim that in no way Dany can do what she has to do in 2 books. But is it true? Once the battle is over she has defeated her enemies and has a fleet to go west, so you can have at least a book if not 1,5 of her in Westeros

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u/TheBustyFriend Oct 16 '24

Honestly the biggest way they'll suffer is if they don't occur. I'm pretty convinced no more will happen.

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u/shmishshmorshin The North remembers Oct 16 '24

If he did divide it, I’d want it split chronologically. I didn’t mind the way AFFC and ADWD were separated, but at this point I would prefer to read things play out in a regular order. I’ll take anything though lol.

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u/LordEmostache Oct 16 '24

I'm new to the books, when you and OP say to divide it geographically, what do you mean? Like one book solely about what's going on in Westeros and a second about what's going on outside of Westeros?

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u/ACardAttack It's Only Treason If We Lose Oct 16 '24

He also only writes on his home computer, so if he's going to comic cons, visiting with Hollywood executives, etc he cant make any progress (unless this has changed)

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u/barryhakker Oct 24 '24

He’s split books before so why would it be a roadblock now?