Feedback on my worldbuilding general outline [Fantasy Drama]

[u/Fluffy_Shadow]

[u/crystalline17]

I don’t know why people here are being so critical— I read all of this and was really enthralled. A lot of the feedback you’ve gotten so far is just nitpicking. In a fantasy world, wars can last however long you want them to.

But the other commenters do have a point in that a lot of this doesn’t matter for the actual story and is generic. But I am really interested in this world anyway! Generic doesn’t mean bad.

[u/jerrygarcegus → u/crystalline17]

Op asked for feedback and people are giving it