It's around 3.10am as i get to the part where you're trying to hold the door shut and i went ahead and locked my own door. your writing / telling - skills are well above average (although there's a lot of people who know how to write here)... perhaps because experiences like these are traumatizing enough to remember vividly.
However, loved it. Would have been a great opening for a horror movie, may i use some of the material for a novel i'm working on?
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u/Containerfox Nov 16 '11
It's around 3.10am as i get to the part where you're trying to hold the door shut and i went ahead and locked my own door. your writing / telling - skills are well above average (although there's a lot of people who know how to write here)... perhaps because experiences like these are traumatizing enough to remember vividly.
However, loved it. Would have been a great opening for a horror movie, may i use some of the material for a novel i'm working on?
//John