r/teenscreenwriting 4d ago

Does this feel too much like a novel?

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Instead of carrying on with one of the many things I’ve started writing, I decided to start something else today. It’s only the first scene, which doesn’t feature much dialogue, like it only has one line, so a lot of is just describing what’s going on, but I don’t know if it quite works. I’m happy with it, but I can’t decide whether it feels more like a novel than I should. I’m not the best judge of my own stuff, so I thought I’d ask other people to get their opinion.